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 Post subject: Blazing Poetry
PostPosted: Mon Jun 13, 2016 6:54 am 
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Fine M:EM folks, here is an astonishing idea that everyone needed but no one dared to ask for...

(...ready to be disappointed? :D)

I'm talking about M:EM rap battles, of course!

Without further ado, let's introduce the first match!
In the red corner, we have a young viashino warming up to set the stage on fire; let's hear some noise for... Sharaka Tharnak!
In the opposite corner we have a renowned lyrical heavyweight, the infamous master of poetry; let's have an applause for... Raiker Venn!

Sharaka will have the honor of the first verse... get ready for a verbal inferno!

Sharaka - first verse


Raiker Venn - First Verse

the Dutchess - First Verse

Sharaka - Second Verse

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 Post subject: Re: Blazing Poetry
PostPosted: Mon Jun 13, 2016 3:30 pm 
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Raiker Venn, naturally, has no interest in replying in kind. The words "Raiker Venn" and "Kind" do not go together. Raiker, therefore, opts to respond in the form of...a Raikervennian Sonnet!

A Response...by Raiker Venn


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 Post subject: Re: Blazing Poetry
PostPosted: Mon Jun 13, 2016 3:32 pm 
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next time this happens someone give me a heads-up and I'll make you some beats to fight over.

:duel:

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 Post subject: Re: Blazing Poetry
PostPosted: Mon Jun 13, 2016 6:37 pm 
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What a great pile.

Rainer Venn wins! Way to open!

Rainer Venn had the strongest punch based upon cleverness, not only, yet, a cohesion based from beginning to end.

Considering the cruciality of a thesis expounding.

Something important to remember, is the seeming effort per task.

This may change when it's an audio file- based upon a multiple of things such as flow.

Its pretty hard. I usually do it on accident, myself!

I'm so floored!

Round two?


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 Post subject: Re: Blazing Poetry
PostPosted: Mon Jun 13, 2016 7:58 pm 
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A new challenger approaches!

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 Post subject: Re: Blazing Poetry
PostPosted: Mon Jun 13, 2016 8:41 pm 
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Nice verse.

If you all believe your verses to be true, than all forthcoming questions will be considered redundant.


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 Post subject: Re: Blazing Poetry
PostPosted: Tue Jun 14, 2016 12:57 am 
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I couldn't imagine I'd have elicited not one, but two replies! I'm pleasantly surprised :D

The Dutchess barging in uninvited is more or less in character, so Sharaka's second verse will reply to both, but if we are willing to make another round with different characters I'd request 'interfering' to be at a minimum.
(I needed a whole day to put Sharaka's verse together, so you'll have to wait a bit for the second part)

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 Post subject: Re: Blazing Poetry
PostPosted: Tue Jun 14, 2016 1:00 am 
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I don't know how many of these I'll do, but it IS fun to write Raikervennian sonnets...


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 Post subject: Re: Blazing Poetry
PostPosted: Tue Jun 14, 2016 4:30 am 
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'Sharaka - second verse'

I wanted to give more space to the Dutchess, but I forced myself to remain within the sixteen lines...

Well, I hope my parts were just half as good as yours :blush: I've had a lot of fun, regardless :D

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 Post subject: Re: Blazing Poetry
PostPosted: Tue Jun 14, 2016 1:31 pm 
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how fun!


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 Post subject: Re: Blazing Poetry
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Molcru has a thunderous voice, i imagine. Kinda like darth vader when he's yelling.


Molcru owns you- like a lab full of tools
and a pad full of rules and cold brews
Turning souls blue, when i rock and roll crews
There aint no room in the boothe- its full of roots
Properly scolding, dropping these boulders on the stoop
Knocking soldiers heads off shoulders with clovers, so cute
No words can break the bones i animate
You're playing patty-cake with the badest jake
A tad too late, may I mention- but you had to wait
Paralyzed with toxins you can't escape
My hands are great- I never lift a finger like a magistrate
A magical quake when I'm standing in place
Playing with branches, you can slap your own face!
You'll be stepping on raikes 'til your forehead breaks
Force-fed flakes of saw-dust when i'm breaking logs up
Watching you cough just makes me noxious


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 Post subject: Re: Blazing Poetry
PostPosted: Tue Jun 14, 2016 3:35 pm 
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Oh damn. Lunar Mystic just unveiled his inner MC.

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 Post subject: Re: Blazing Poetry
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I surely appreciate the enthusiasm, but this makes the whole thing a bit messy :V

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 Post subject: Re: Blazing Poetry
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oops

I wasn't even paying attention.
-got carried away-

please continue your battle!


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 Post subject: Re: Blazing Poetry
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I've been asked to provide Raiker with a final verse to answer the charges of Sharaka and The Duchess, so here you go!

Spoilered because LANGUAGE!

Raiker Venn responds


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 Post subject: Re: Blazing Poetry
PostPosted: Thu Jul 14, 2016 2:33 am 
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Loved it! I didn't know Raiker used such words, it's so undignified :D

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