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PostPosted: Mon Oct 12, 2015 2:31 am 
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I'd like to thank Barinellos, OrcishLibrarian, RavenoftheBlack, RuwinReborn, and Tevish Szat for permission to use their characters and settings.

This is an ongoing serial about the greatest pop-rock girl group in the Multiverse. Please enjoy.

Prologue

Chapter 1: A Flame in a Book

Chapter 2: Secret Planeswalker Club

Chapter 3: Luck of the Draw

Chapter 4: Amesha, Amesha

Interlude 1: The Flap of Doom

Chapter 5: The Next Step

Chapter 6: Ride the Lightning

Chapter 7: Break It Down

Chapter 8: Friends for Life (and Death)


TO BE CONTINUED

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Solphos: Solphos | Fool's Gold | Planeswalker's Guide | The Guiding Light | The Weight of a Soul
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 12, 2015 8:49 am 
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am I gonna have to compose for this too

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 12, 2015 8:52 am 
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That depends. Do you want to?

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YMtC: My Deck of Many Things | NGA Masters | 2 | 3 | Roses of Paliano | Duel Decks: War of the Wheel | Jakkard: Wild Cards | From Maral's Vault | Taramir: The Dark Tide
Solphos: Solphos | Fool's Gold | Planeswalker's Guide | The Guiding Light | The Weight of a Soul
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 12, 2015 9:00 am 
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after scoring a whole musical in about two weeks, I can't imagine some pop rock would be all that difficult.

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The BLOCK I'm currently pretending I'll finish: Fleets Of Ossia (complete!) | Wavebreak (complete!) | The Second Flood (in progress!)
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 12, 2015 10:48 am 
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This has made me laugh. I can only hope it continues to do so!

I will say that, despite the silliness of this whole affair, the characters stay remarkably in-character, all things considered - what's more, the points where I felt they were most out of character gave me more to think about than not.

For instance, Verity strikes me as being very composed - vomiting is never something I would picture her doing. But, uh, bodily reactions don't really care how composed you are. And I'm not even sure Leon can fill pity, so I probably laughed longer than I should have at "Pity about the horse."

Anyway, I look forward to reading the rest of this.

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 13, 2015 7:17 am 
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Tonight on ANGELSONG: True love! Overwrought symbolism! And fatal levels of cuteness!

Chapter 1: A Flame in a Book

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YMtC: My Deck of Many Things | NGA Masters | 2 | 3 | Roses of Paliano | Duel Decks: War of the Wheel | Jakkard: Wild Cards | From Maral's Vault | Taramir: The Dark Tide
Solphos: Solphos | Fool's Gold | Planeswalker's Guide | The Guiding Light | The Weight of a Soul
Game design: Pokémon Tales | Fleets of Ossia: War Machines | Hunter Killer | Red Jackie's Run


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PostPosted: Wed Oct 14, 2015 12:30 am 
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Much like Beryl, I believe the only way I can adequately describe how much I LOVE everything about this is by attempting to describe each chapter with a little help from the great ballads of our time.

The Prologue: "If You Leave Me Now" - Chicago
Chapter 1: "I'll Have to Say I Love You in a Song" - Jim Croce
Chapter 2: "Science Genius Girl" - Freezepop
Chapter 3: "Wanted Dead or Alive" - Bon Jovi

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 14, 2015 3:18 am 
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A new challenger has entered the ring! And she promises to shine some light on things...

Chapter 2: Secret Planeswalker Club

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YMtC: My Deck of Many Things | NGA Masters | 2 | 3 | Roses of Paliano | Duel Decks: War of the Wheel | Jakkard: Wild Cards | From Maral's Vault | Taramir: The Dark Tide
Solphos: Solphos | Fool's Gold | Planeswalker's Guide | The Guiding Light | The Weight of a Soul
Game design: Pokémon Tales | Fleets of Ossia: War Machines | Hunter Killer | Red Jackie's Run


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PostPosted: Thu Oct 15, 2015 12:14 am 
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I feel like I spent most of my day today fighting the urge to stick my head in the microwave and press the baked potato button.

But this put a smile on my face.

Thanks for the smile, CKY.

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 15, 2015 12:25 am 
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Every day is a happy day with ANGELSONG!

Thanks for all the kind words, everyone. You all are the motivation for me to keep writing.

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YMtC: My Deck of Many Things | NGA Masters | 2 | 3 | Roses of Paliano | Duel Decks: War of the Wheel | Jakkard: Wild Cards | From Maral's Vault | Taramir: The Dark Tide
Solphos: Solphos | Fool's Gold | Planeswalker's Guide | The Guiding Light | The Weight of a Soul
Game design: Pokémon Tales | Fleets of Ossia: War Machines | Hunter Killer | Red Jackie's Run


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PostPosted: Fri Oct 16, 2015 4:38 am 
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Alessa says hi!

Chapter 3: Luck of the Draw

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YMtC: My Deck of Many Things | NGA Masters | 2 | 3 | Roses of Paliano | Duel Decks: War of the Wheel | Jakkard: Wild Cards | From Maral's Vault | Taramir: The Dark Tide
Solphos: Solphos | Fool's Gold | Planeswalker's Guide | The Guiding Light | The Weight of a Soul
Game design: Pokémon Tales | Fleets of Ossia: War Machines | Hunter Killer | Red Jackie's Run


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PostPosted: Fri Oct 16, 2015 10:01 pm 
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Hi, Alessa!

For a second, I was going to ask why Lia wasn't saying "hi," too.

Then I figured it out.

D'oh!

Anyway, I love Alessa's fourth-wall shattering foreshadowing. That's a fun trick. :)

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 22, 2015 10:08 pm 
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Just when you least expect it, ANGELSONG strikes back! Pow and ka-BAM!

Chapter 4: Amesha, Amesha

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The format of YMtC and the Expanded Multiverse.
YMtC: My Deck of Many Things | NGA Masters | 2 | 3 | Roses of Paliano | Duel Decks: War of the Wheel | Jakkard: Wild Cards | From Maral's Vault | Taramir: The Dark Tide
Solphos: Solphos | Fool's Gold | Planeswalker's Guide | The Guiding Light | The Weight of a Soul
Game design: Pokémon Tales | Fleets of Ossia: War Machines | Hunter Killer | Red Jackie's Run


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PostPosted: Fri Oct 23, 2015 4:44 pm 
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Hahaha oh my goodness. Thank you for making a rather dry shuttle ride 100 times more entertaining for me.

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 24, 2015 4:13 am 
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My critical ability is at a loss with this. It's all over the top but it kept me reading and sniggering like an idiot so hell, it works.

Keep up the good work!

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I'm glad to hear you guys like it!

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YMtC: My Deck of Many Things | NGA Masters | 2 | 3 | Roses of Paliano | Duel Decks: War of the Wheel | Jakkard: Wild Cards | From Maral's Vault | Taramir: The Dark Tide
Solphos: Solphos | Fool's Gold | Planeswalker's Guide | The Guiding Light | The Weight of a Soul
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Encore, encore! :D

It makes me inexplicably happy that Beryl continues to scream whenever she's flying/falling through the air.

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We interrupt your regularly scheduled ANGELSONG to bring... foreshadowing.

Interlude 1: The Flap of Doom

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Solphos: Solphos | Fool's Gold | Planeswalker's Guide | The Guiding Light | The Weight of a Soul
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We interrupt your foreshadowing to bring you... your regularly scheduled ANGELSONG!

Chapter 5: The Next Step

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YMtC: My Deck of Many Things | NGA Masters | 2 | 3 | Roses of Paliano | Duel Decks: War of the Wheel | Jakkard: Wild Cards | From Maral's Vault | Taramir: The Dark Tide
Solphos: Solphos | Fool's Gold | Planeswalker's Guide | The Guiding Light | The Weight of a Soul
Game design: Pokémon Tales | Fleets of Ossia: War Machines | Hunter Killer | Red Jackie's Run


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PostPosted: Wed Oct 28, 2015 12:09 am 
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As a former colleague of mine once put it, pop music is not a crime. :)



Also...

Alessa grinned, her eyes twinkling like stars.

"We need a tour van."

Yesssssssssssssssssssss... :D

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