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 Post subject: TPcardsW 40: Berserkers
PostPosted: Tue Dec 13, 2016 11:33 pm 
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It's a tribe that's really fun to design for.

Redfoot Rager
Creature - Goblin Berserker
Haste
Suspend 1 (Rather than cast this card from your hand, you may pay 0 and exile it with a time counter on it. At the beginning of your upkeep, remove a time counter. When the last is removed, cast it without paying its mana cost. It has haste.)
1/1

Basically, I just want to give people the chance to live the dream. The dream of swinging for 4 on turn 2 without spending any mana. Or maybe the dream of sacrificing a bunch of stuff. I just want to inspire people to dream.
Just what you all wanted; Lotus Bloom meets Raging Goblin!
This could also have been white. Actually, I considered making it white at 2/1 but that seemed too scary, even if I made it a 2 drop to cast normally.
Edit- now with power and toughness!


Bloodrage Berserker
Creature - Goblin Berserker
Whenever a player loses life, ~ gets +1/+1 until end of turn.
1/1

Simple puzzle + small upside = draft archetype?



Raging Fire
Instant
~ costs less for each Berserker you control.
~ deals X damage to target creature or player.

Crazy, but I don't think there's ever been an X burn spell with built in cost reduction. One with "costs X less to cast" isn't a thing at any rate.
Would it be too good if it counted goblins and/or berserkers?
Edit- Now with Radical Jackal's wording.

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PostPosted: Wed Dec 14, 2016 9:51 am 
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Slaughtermaster
Creature - Devil Berserker (R)
Whenever Slaughtermaster would deal an amount of damage, instead he deals that much damage to each creature, player, and planeswalker exept for himself.
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Nice wordings ?

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PostPosted: Wed Dec 14, 2016 10:50 am 
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The first 2 are fun especially the rager

Raging Fire - I think you are trying to use X to mean 2 different values. You can say "cost less for each Berzerker you control" It is kind of like Crater's Claws which is a card I never played but it looked fun.

Slaughtermaster - If you want a wording critic I think you can do "would deal damage" (you don't need "an amount of") and it should probably say "each other creature" (instead of "exept for himself") I'm not sure what kind of deck wants to use that but it could be fun and splashy.


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