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 Post subject: ❀The Flower Shop❀
PostPosted: Wed Sep 03, 2014 12:19 pm 
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Just a place for my random card designs.

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Zhang Fon, Storm Fist
Legendary creature - Human Monk M
Haste, Flying
When ~ deals combat damage to a player, return the next instant or sorcery spell you cast this turn to your hand as it resolves.
Typhoons at my back, before us lies our future.
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Valhalla
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~ enters the battlefield tapped.
T: add W to your mana pool
Whenever a creature you control dies in battle, if it isn't legendary, you may pay 3WW. If you do, return that creature to the battlefield. It's legendary and is a spirit in addition to it's other types.

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 Post subject: Re: The Flower Shop
PostPosted: Wed Sep 03, 2014 3:10 pm 
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That is one cool land....I do not care to interpret whether its balanced or well designed...it's just awesome.

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 Post subject: Re: The Flower Shop
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I don't like that Zhang Fon tends to recur the same spell over and over again. I think it would be more fun if it cost more and returned a random spell. The flavor is pretty cool though.

Valhalla is awesome. Maybe put a counter on the creature to mark that it's changed, like Sensei Golden-Tail?

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 Post subject: Re: The Flower Shop
PostPosted: Thu Sep 04, 2014 9:47 am 
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Thanks for the comments!

Dark Chocolate Bunny
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Whenever ~ becomes the target of a red spell sacrifice it and put a 5/5 black ooze creature token with absorb 3, and "Whenever a creature dealt damage by ~ dies this turn, put a +1/+1 counter on ~"

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 Post subject: Re: The Flower Shop
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Is that good or bad? I really like the 7 5 3 1 I have going on with it.

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 Post subject: Re: The Flower Shop
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Mostly the mental image.

Dark Chocolate Bunny is one of those cute cards that it's difficult to actually play with in a real deck. The flavor is cool but I don't really like the mechanics at all. I didn't notice the 7-5-3-1, that's neat.

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Mental Entanglement
Instant - Riddle
If ~ was answered exile target spell. otherwise counter that spell unless it's controller pays 3 (A riddle is answered if a spell is cast after it)
Thinking leads to over thinking..

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 Post subject: Re: The Flower Shop
PostPosted: Sat Sep 06, 2014 4:52 pm 
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Sorry CKY, I did not actually look up what transformations he has.

Sun Wukong, Of 72 Transformations
Planeswalker - Wukong
{+1}: ~ becomes a 3/3 green monkey warrior creature until end of turn and fights up to one target creature. Prevent all damage that would be dealt to him this turn.
{-2}: ~ Becomes a 1/1 green and black monkey snake creature with deathtouch until end of turn. Prevent all damage that would be dealt to him this turn
{-4}: ~ Becomes a 4/4 green and white monkey tiger creature with trample until end of turn. Prevent all damage that would be dealt to him this turn
{-10}: ~ becomes a 7/7 red and green monkey dragon creature with flying and trample and indestructible that's still a planeswalker.
[4]

More eventually. He has so many powers it's hard to make something synergistic and representative of him.

Edit: I thought of a thing and changed the previous thing

Sun Wukong, Handsome Monkey King

Planeswalker - Wukong
{+1}: Put an equipment artifact token onto the battlefield with equip and "equipped creature gets +1/+1.
{-1}: Put a 2/2 green and blue monkey illusion warrior creature token named "Monkey King Clone." onto the battlefield.
{0}: ~ becomes a 2/2 green monkey warrior creature until end of turn. Prevent all damage that would be dealt to him this turn.
{-5}: You get an emblem with "Prevent all damage that would be dealt to creatures named Monkey King Clone and Wukong planeswalkers you control. Whenever damage is prevented this way, draw that many cards"
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 Post subject: Re: The Flower Shop
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Wukong is a Mary Sue basically.

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 Post subject: Re: The Flower Shop
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Whenever a creature you control dies in battle

love this wording and am surprised wotc hasnt tried to make it work yet

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 Post subject: Re: The Flower Shop
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Wukong is a Mary Sue basically.


Well duh. He's the original shonen manga hero/superman.

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 Post subject: Re: The Flower Shop
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You all teach me so much on here. I always wondered why Monkey characters are referred to as Son...

Those are some sick walkers Lily. Totally new takes.

I feel like 72 could use some tweaking...after his ultimate there is very little reason to use any of his other abilities. Also should his abilities say "Until the beginning of your next turn..." otherwise the deathtouch is a bit underwhelming as it cant be used for defense and this guy comes out so late.

That equipment ability is straight inspired...wish affinity didnt exist so we could see a lot of other cards that dropped cool equipment tokens. You could make treasure trove or Armory cards!

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Heavenly Peach Banquet
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~ enters the battlefield with 3 feast counters
Remove a feast counter form ~: Choose one -
* Each player gains 5 life.
* Creatures gain lifelink and indestructible until end of turn.
* Each player draws cards until they have the same number of cards as in the hand of the player with the most cards.
Activate this ability only once each turn and only during your turn.

Shut up blue, white needs card draw every once in a while. This may or may not go into my chinese block, if I need a white rare or mythic slot filled some day.

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 Post subject: Re: The Flower Shop
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That's loco though, Lily. That's 15 life from one turn to the next for 3 mana and the second effect on repeat is crazy too late game and the last one is just icing on the heavenly cake. I dunno. I do like the flavor, and I don't like judging on power level, but do you really think this would be over-costed at say ?

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 Post subject: Re: The Flower Shop
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It's 15 life over 3 turns and every effect is global. Maybe 4 or 5 mana but 6 would be complete crap even in casual.

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 Post subject: Re: The Flower Shop
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It's sort of like a planeswalker


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 Post subject: Re: The Flower Shop
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Wouldn't a heavenly peach banquet be better as a sorcery that gains life?

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 Post subject: Re: The Flower Shop
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I like riddle.


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 Post subject: Re: The Flower Shop
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Can I get some flowers, please?


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